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We're experimenting with a strapline for publicity purposes and I'd really value the opinions of our users about whether you think it's any good or not:

The Novel Factory turns frustrated writers into productive authors

Any feedback would be very welcome, especially suggestions for improvements!

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Hmm. It sounds a little too much like TNF does all the work or is somehow magical. I'd prefer something more like:-

The Novel Factory helps frustrated writers become productive authors
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Very good point - that's much better. Does anyone else have any further improvements?
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different angle

The Novel Factory: thoughtful structure and support makes for a successful author.

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A little brainstorming:
The Novel Factory: Helping to bring order to the chaos of creativity
The Novel Factory: Bringing order to the endless world of stories.
The Novel Factory: Helping your creativity fall into place.
The Novel Factory: Helping you put together the puzzle of your story.
The Novel Factory: Decoding your creative flow, exposing the novels within.
The Novel Factory: Turning the overwhelming into the possible.


or:

The Novel Factory: helping eager writers become productive authors

'Frustrated' sounds negative and perhaps might make people feel silly, I think. With eager you show that the writer is still empowered, but eagerness can sometimes be too much and NF steps in to help bring order to the chaos. Something like that hehe
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I find the strapline a little too formal for a creative service.  I prefer something a bit more informal ie

'The Novel Factory leads the way for writers to grow exciting ideas into good writing and polished manuscripts that are reader ready!'



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Originally Posted by erogenesis
A little brainstorming:
The Novel Factory: Helping to bring order to the chaos of creativity
The Novel Factory: Bringing order to the endless world of stories.
The Novel Factory: Helping your creativity fall into place.
The Novel Factory: Helping you put together the puzzle of your story.
The Novel Factory: Decoding your creative flow, exposing the novels within.
The Novel Factory: Turning the overwhelming into the possible.



These are amazing! Do we have your permission to use them?

I particularly like this one:

The Novel Factory: Helping to bring order to the chaos of creativity

My only wonder is - do people like the chaos of creativity? Then again (just thinking aloud here) the Novel Factory probably isn't the right tool for those people anyway...

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These are amazing! Do we have your permission to use them?

I particularly like this one:

The Novel Factory: Helping to bring order to the chaos of creativity

My only wonder is - do people like the chaos of creativity? Then again (just thinking aloud here) the Novel Factory probably isn't the right tool for those people anyway...


Yeah go for it! Use anything you want.

Good point about the chaos. Maybe something along the lines of 'Helping you navigate through your wondrous sea of creativity' beings positivity to the chaos part, but basically says, you need to order yourself at some point.

edit: The Novel Factory: Helping to bring order to the chaotic fun of creativity
or: The Novel Factory: Providing order in the lovely chaos of creativity
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